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©
2001 Thomas F. Lane e-mail: tflane@hotmail.com INT
- DRESSING ROOM - NIGHT SUPER:
“May, 1948. Sons of Sicily Social Club.
Brooklyn, New York.” CLOSE
UP on
a pair of hands rushing to tie the laces on an old pair of red boxing gloves
worn by somebody with pale, wiry arms. The gloves are comically large, with
ripped seams, a few holes and unusually long laces. The
room reverberates with the sound of crowd STAMPING and CLAPPING offscreen. A
door OPENS offscreen. VOICE FROM DOOR (o.s.) Showtime. You ready to earn another Purple Heart,
Mister War Hero? The
man tying the gloves (TOM EVANS) shakes his hands in frustration. TOM EVANS Give us a minute! Where’d you get these damn gloves? The man wearing the gloves (MAC MACKOUCKAS) answers: MAC Borrowed ‘em. The door CLOSES. The
picture freezes on the boxing gloves and we hear the voice of Mac, as an old
man. His voice is rough, yet animated
and emphatic. OLD MAC (v.o.) Before I was a boxer, I was a dancer. BLACK SCREEN SUPER: “Two
weeks earlier.” FADE
IN on a
crowd of feet dancing to SWING MUSIC. INT
- DANCE HALL IN BROOKLYN, NEW YORK- NIGHT One
pair of feet, in shiny black shoes offset by white pants, is particularly
animated. Among
the other dancers is TOM EVANS, a thin man just under six feet, wearing glasses
and dancing with his wife CELIA, a pretty Mexican woman about six months
pregnant. The
song ends and Mac shakes hands with the Young Lady. Mac
steps off the dance floor as the band strikes up Glenn Miller’s song “In The
Mood”. Tom and Celia continue slow
dancing despite the uptempo music. LILLY
ROBBINS steps in front of Mac as he exits the dancefloor. Lilly is a cute redhead, also in her mid-twenties. LILLY How come you don’t dance with me anymore, Mac? MAC You’re Freddy’s girl now. LILLY You’ve danced with every girl here, and I’ll bet you
didn’t ask one of them if they were single or not. MAC It’s just dancing, Lilly. LILLY Exactly. So
let’s just dance. I promise not to get swept off my feet again. Lilly
smiles and extends her hand, and Mac does the same. Just as they are about to touch, Mac reaches behind Lilly and
grabs a broom leaning against the wall. Mac
spins away and dances into the middle of the dancefloor with the broom. He
clowns around with the broom as if it were his partner, twirling, spinning and
dipping it, and then throwing it over his head and catching it. He’s a great dancer. The other dancers form a circle around him. INT
- BAR AREA IN DANCE HALL - NIGHT MOUSE,
a stubble-headed mountain of a man sits at a table near the bar, arm wrestling
a much smaller man in front of a crowd.
Mouse easily defeats his opponent and the crowd INT
- DANCE FLOOR - NIGHT Mac
dances romantically with the broom, stroking the straws as if it were a woman’s
hair. The other dancers LAUGH and back
away to give him room. Mac
hams it up with the broom, spinning, twirling and flipping it. The crowd LAUGHS and APPLAUDS. Mac looks to Lilly and extends his hand. Lilly
hesitates for a second, then dances out to meet Mac in the middle of the dancefloor. Mac
dances in a circle around Lilly, sweeping around her with the broom. Lilly puts her hand to her mouth and
laughs. Mac offers her the broom and
Lilly takes it. Mac
runs the entire length of the dancefloor, slides the last ten feet and plops
himself down into a chair at an empty table next to Mouse’s table, just as the
band hits the last HIGH NOTE of “In The Mood”. The
MUSIC STOPS and in the sudden silence Lilly is left standing alone in the
middle of the dancefloor holding the broom.
She looks at Mac fanning himself in the chair and breaks into
LAUGHTER. The whole crowd LAUGHS along
and APPLAUDS. As
Mac fans himself his elbow tips a glass of water on the table. In slow motion, we see the glass teeter on
the edge of the table. OLD MAC (v.o.) I remember two key moments in my boxing career: one turned me into a boxer, the other turned
me into a winner. In that moment my
future hung in the balance. If what
happened next didn’t happen I never woulda been a boxer. The glass falls off the table and BREAKS, splashing
water on Mouse’s pants leg. Mouse
jumps up, grabs Mac from behind, hauls him to his feet and spins him around. Two men in their mid-twenties sitting at the bar run
over and get between Mac and Mouse. The
first is KID, short, thin, dark-haired and with a baby face, and the other is
EUGENE, tall and heavyset with a blonde soup-bowl haircut. The are both about Mac’s age. EUGENE Hey, take it easy.
It was an accident. MOUSE (to Mac) You’re gonna pay for that. Of course, I’m sorry. What were you drinking? MOUSE That’s not what I meant. Mouse rolls up his sleeves, revealing huge
arms. Tom runs up to them. TOM Okay, let’s settle down. MOUSE Let him go.
Unless he doesn’t want to be let go. Mac bristles and takes a step forward. Tom, Kid and Eugene push him back. KID Mac ain’t scared of anything, he’s a veteran! EUGENE With a Purple Star. KID (correcting) Purple Heart. EUGENE And Purple
Heart too. He’s got both. MOUSE Sounds like he’s real good at getting injured. Navy boy, huh? MAC These days.
Used to be Marines. MOUSE No kidding?
My old man was a Marine. MAC That so?
Where was he -- MOUSE I hated my old man. Mac raises his fists, but Tom jumps between them. Come on, fellas.
Can’t we settle this like gentlemen? MAC Ask him. Mouse’s scowling mug breaks into a big grin. MOUSE Like gentlemen?
Sure, why not? BLACK
SCREEN SUPER: “Two weeks later. Sons of Sicily Social Club,
Brooklyn, New York.” INT
- DRESSING ROOM - NIGHT CLOSE
UP on
Tom Evan’s fumbling hands finish tying up the boxing gloves. OLD MAC (v.o.) Settling it “like gentlemen” apparently meant
beating the tar out of each other in the ring instead of in the street. Tom slaps Mac’s knee. TOM Let’s go. INT
- BOXING RING IN THE SONS OF SICILY SOCIAL CLUB - NIGHT Two
hundred people are packed into the room.
Cigarette smoke hangs thick in the air. Mac
and Tom are on one side of the ring, Mouse on the other. Mac looks down at his gloves. MAC (showing gloves to Tom) Hey, Tom. Mac’s
gloves are on the wrong hands; the left is on the right and the right is on the
left. TOM What the - MAC They’re backwards. For Pete’s sake, why didn’t you say something
before? MAC You looked like you knew what you were doing. TOM Can you make a fist? MAC Sure. TOM Good enough.
Maybe nobody’ll notice. Kid
and Eugene stand outside of the ring, tending to the stool, towel and
bucket. Mouse
glares across the ring and Mac swallows nervously. OLD MAC (v.o.) His name was Mouse, but he didn’t look like a mouse
to me. He looked more like a
mountain. A big angry mountain with
storm clouds gathering at the peak. He was semi-professional, sparring partner
to Rosco Battaglia, the heavyweight champion of the world. And me, I counted boxes in the shipping
depot at the Brooklyn Navy Yard. So can
you blame me if I was just a little bit scared? The
smoke hangs so thick that Mac can barely make out the crowd. He waves a huge glove in front of his face
to clear the smoke. OLD MAC (v.o.) Lilly said she was coming with Fabulous Freddy, but
I didn’t see them, just Sonny, my old buddy from Iwo Jima. Sitting
ringside is SONNY KLINE, a one-legged veteran in a wheelchair. Sonny is about five years older than Mac and
wears a green U.S. Marine Corps jacket with a Purple Heart pinned to it. A collection of small American flags wrapped
together with a rubber band protrudes from his jacket pocket. The
bell RINGS. Mac and Mouse advance to
the center of the ring. OLD MAC (v.o.) He was an awful big fellow, but what he didn’t know
was I was as strong as two men in my right arm, ‘cause I had to compensate for
my gimpy left. I was still carrying
around a bullet fragment from when I took a hit at Iwo Jima. Mac
shuffles around Mouse, in a very graceful but unboxer-like way. Mouse LAUGHS
and casts a quick grin at his cornerman.
The picture freezes on Mouse’s smirking face. OLD MAC (v.o.) Ha! That was
all I needed! I was on him like cold on
ice. Just
as Mouse grins at his cornerman Mac springs forward and SMASHES a roundhouse
right into Mouse’s jaw. The crowd
GASPS. Mouse’s
eyes roll up in his head and he topples like a felled tree, sending a
thunderous BOOM through the suddenly silent hall. After
a beat of silence the crowd ERUPTS in WILD CHEERS and APPLAUSE. Flashbulbs POP all around. Sonny
applauds and salutes Mac. Tom,
Eugene and Kid rush into the ring and surround Mac. TOM Incredible! EUGENE (to Tom) C’mon, let’s get him up. Tom
and Eugene lift Mac onto their shoulders.
Kid is too short to help support Mac, so he holds Tom’s arms to help
bear the load. They spin Mac around and
around. MAC’S
P.O.V. The
room is spinning, flashbulbs POP through the smoke and the crowd CHEERS. The spinning stops, and through dizzy eyes
Mac sees Lilly emerge through the haze like an angel from a cloud. INT - BOXING RING - NIGHT Mac
jumps down and rushes to Lilly, who stands on the ring apron on the other side
of the ropes. A handsome man with slick
black hair combed back stands behind her, grinning: it is FABULOUS FREDDY
CICIO. He’s smoking a cigarette and
wearing two-tone shoes and a very expensive suit. MAC (to Lilly) What’d you think? Lilly
takes Mac’s face between her hands and plants a big kiss on his cheek. OLD
MAC, in his late sixties or early seventies, sits in his backyard wearing a
light sweater. His face is deeply lined
and his nose shows evidence of having been broken. He’s being interviewed, and he grins continuously, delighted to
be the subject of an interview. INTERVIEWER (o.s.) Do you remember the first time you got knocked out? OLD MAC Sure I do, you kidding? You always remember your first time. I think I was about ten years old ... FLASHBACK EXT
- BROOKLYN SCHOOLYARD PLAYGROUND - DAY YOUNG
MAC, about ten years old, tussles with YOUNG EUGENE, about the same age. Eugene is a little bigger than Mac, and
wears the same blond bowl haircut he’ll have for the rest of his life. YOUNG TOM and YOUNG KID watch the fight with
FIVE OTHER CHILDREN. YOUNG
LILLY strolls by, spinning a toy parasol over her shoulder. A little white bonnet rests atop her curly
red hair. She smiles at Mac and waves
as she walks by. Mac
stares at Lilly, mouth hanging open, forgetting the fight. YOUNG MAC Lilly Robbins. Whatta dame. Eugene’s
fist SMACKS into Mac’s face, and Mac falls over unconscious, but with a big,
happy smile on his face. INT
- BOXING RING, SONS OF SICILY SOCIAL CLUB - NIGHT Lilly’s
kiss leaves a red imprint on Mac’s cheek.
Mac’s eyes flutter and he stumbles backwards into the arms of Tom,
Eugene and Kid. Mac has a big, happy
smile on his face. Lilly’s
face is flushed and beautiful. OLD MAC (v.o.) Whatta knockout. Fabulous
Freddy draws on his cigarette and studies Mac through squinted eyes. EXT
- WEGMAN’S COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT A
“Help Wanted” sign hangs on the front door.
Inside we see Fabulous Freddy, Lilly, Mac, Tom, Kid and Eugene sitting
at a booth. INT
- WEGMAN’S COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT Mac,
Eugene, Kid and Tom are all crushed into one side of a booth while Lilly and
Fabulous Freddy sit on the other side.
The table is crowded with food, and Mac stuffs apple pie into his mouth. FABULOUS FREDDY You were fabulous, Mac, fabulous! EXT
- OLD MAC’S BACKYARD - DAY OLD MAC Everything was fabulous to Freddy, that’s how he got
his name. It was fabulous this, and
fabulous that, and don’t you look fabulous today? Never just good or okay,
always fabulous. (laughs) He was a funny guy.
I couldn’t help liking him, even though I felt strange that he was
dating Lilly after me and her called it quits.
Because you know, sometimes even when you call it quits it ain’t really
over. (winks) INT
- RESTAURANT - NIGHT LILLY (to Mac) You were really - FABULOUS FREDDY (interrupting) Can I talk freely? Mac,
Tom, Eugene and Kid and look at each other. MAC It’s free to talk. FABULOUS FREDDY I want you to box for me. I can get you ten fights, and maybe ... (raises a finger)... just maybe, a spot on the Hurricane Tony Show. KID Wow, did you hear that? Hurricane Tony! Freddy, I’m not a boxer. That was dumb luck tonight. FABULOUS FREDDY Dumb luck and a hard right to the jaw. Listen, who thinks it was just dumb luck
tonight? The table is silent. FABULOUS FREDDY And who thinks Mac is blessed with a natural gift? Freddy
raises his hand, as do Kid, Eugene and Tom.
Lilly
raises her hand, smiles, and she gives Mac a deep, meaningful look. TOM Wait a minute.
With all respect, Freddy, you book singers, dancers, magic shows,
Lilly’s trained poodles. And, it’s a
good act and everything, Lilly, but it ain’t boxing. FABULOUS FREDDY It’s all show business. I’ll book the fights, and you keep knocking people out. Think you can handle it, Mac? EUGENE He can do it. KID ‘Course he can. TOM What’s in it for you? What’s in it for him? FABULOUS FREDDY I usually take twenty-five percent, but Mac’s a
friend so I’ll make it twenty. And Mac,
I’m gonna guarantee you thirty ... no, not thirty ... fifty bucks a fight. Mac drops his fork. FABULOUS FREDDY (cont.) You can all be in on it, a team like you were
tonight. Mac can pay you what, maybe
five dollars a fight each? Out of his purse, of course. I’ll put something together by Memorial Day,
and then we can make the announcement at the V.A. club after the parade. EXT
- OLD MAC’S BACKYARD - DAY Old
Mac LAUGHS. OLD MAC And that’s how I got into the fight game. I signed a contract with Fabulous Freddy for
ten fights. INTERVIEWER (o.s.) And you got knocked out ten times in a row? OLD MAC More or less. EXT
- ST. BARTHOLOMEW’S CHURCH IN BROOKLYN - DAY Church
bells RING out on a bright, clear Sunday morning. People exit the church, some
stopping to chat with a short, thin gray-haired priest in his mid-sixties known
to his flock simply as PADRE. Tom
helps Celia carefully down the steps.
Celia is very pregnant. PADRE I’m planting trees today, Tom. Care to help? TOM I’d love to, Padre, but the baby’s been kicking all
morning, and I need to get Celia home. PADRE Celia, did anyone ever inform you of the nine month
rule? I believe you’ve been pregnant
for at least a year and a half. Celia
caresses her belly. CELIA It’s only been five months. I’m just showing more than some girls. TOM Little Tommy’s going to be the size of a Christmas
ham. CELIA (laughing) It might be a girl. Not a chance.
Every first born child in my family tree going all the way back to Adam
and Eve has been a boy, and always named Tom. PADRE I didn’t realize Cain and Abel had an elder brother
named Tom. I must have missed that
chapter in Genesis. Padre sees Mac exit the church. PADRE (cont.) Excuse me, I think I just found my beast of burden. EXT
- CHURCH GARDEN - DAY Padre
sits on a stump, holding a gardening book. A
row of seven sapling trees with their roots and soil wrapped up in canvas lean
against the side of the church. Mac, in his undershirt and wearing work gloves,
carries one of the saplings to a fresh
hole, puts it in, loosens the canvas sack, then fills the hole with dirt. MAC Now I heard everything. A boxing priest! PADRE I wasn’t a priest at the time, just a young spit
like you. Then came my thirteenth fight .... |